虽然批改网的打分来自于机器
但是没有一些精妙的表达
想要分数90+还是很难很难的
今天我们就一起看看
宣老师学生写的两篇作文中的好表达
Currently, there is an irreversible and inevitable trend that trust is playing anincreasingly indispensable role in the commercial society. Just as the old saying goes, trust is the foundational characteristic of an individual. Consequently, it is highly essential to be conscious of the ample significance of trust and cultivate sufficient trust between the businesses and consumers.To make it much clearer, trust is of great significance to today's transactions on the grounds that consumers will purchase the products rarely if merchants are trustworthyenough. Indeed, the role of trust is not exclusively confined to this. Trust can contribute to narrowing the gap between the consumers and the merchants to a large extent indispensably. What's more, trust is an intangible asset which can boost the value of the products, consequently benefiting both consumers and merchants. Therefore, trust is anincredibly vital component of today's society and has been a standard to assess a person.In conclusion, trust is an indispensable component of a person's personality and is significantly beneficial to enhance the commercial society.
In an age of instant gratification, too often have we found ourselves yearning for a certain item or position, for example the admission to a prestigious university, yet failing to exert the effort required to gain what you desired. It is no surprise that your result seldom turns out to be satisfactory. The outcome, though unsatisfactory, is without doubt justifiable, as it is basically improper for one to gain what he does not deserve.
Just like how you cannot own harvest melons if you haven't planted melon seeds previously, you can only achieve greatly in what you have paid effort to. Let's imagine an alternative world where people, similar to harvesting melons with sunflowers seeds, can achieve their goals effortlessly all the time. Instead of being a paradise in which you can be prominent and collect your goals like monopoly, this alternative world will most certainly be a chaotic one. Anyone with rational thinking will not disagree with the fact that in a fantasied place like the one described above, will overflow with injustice, considering thatrewards are given to the unworthy. This will also lead to despise towards the diligent ones in a global scale, which will result in an unproductive society.While insisting that you cannot reap beyond what you sow, the writer wishes to remind you that other factors such as one’s intelligence also contribute to how much you sow. An intelligent individual might collect their goals with ease. Nevertheless, they still cannot succeed in fields that they did not exert effort into. To sum up with, nobody should, could, or will succeed in field that they paid no attention to, in other words, you can only reap what you sow.
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